Beta v0.9 Error Report Thread
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shinjin977
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Re: Beta v0.9 Error Report Thread
scene 2311 - These are just your deserts. before: These are your just deserts.
EDIT by Phlebas: working as intended, i.e. "this is what you deserve".
EDIT by Phlebas: working as intended, i.e. "this is what you deserve".
Re: Beta v0.9 Error Report Thread
Non-scene related
When I use physical shield with Riannon it says POW-UP in red. Shouldn't that be DEF up?
EDIT by Phlebas - I think it's "POW-UP" for all buffs and "POW-DOWN" for all debuffs
When I use physical shield with Riannon it says POW-UP in red. Shouldn't that be DEF up?
EDIT by Phlebas - I think it's "POW-UP" for all buffs and "POW-DOWN" for all debuffs
Re: Beta v0.9 Error Report Thread
#2410
"I, I'm fine......ah...... ...... I'm.....just fine, so......!!"
Limwris's box doesn't appear in that line (one that shows who is thinking/talking)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
#2505
Llyr
"No. I Just......"
Shouldn't that be a comma? Or an ellipsis?
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
#2505
I held back her legs, as she reflexively tried to close them. Lly's inner thighs stiffened and shook.
Llyr's name spelt wrong.
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
"I, I'm fine......ah...... ...... I'm.....just fine, so......!!"
Limwris's box doesn't appear in that line (one that shows who is thinking/talking)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
#2505
Llyr
"No. I Just......"
Shouldn't that be a comma? Or an ellipsis?
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
#2505
I held back her legs, as she reflexively tried to close them. Lly's inner thighs stiffened and shook.
Llyr's name spelt wrong.
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
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shinjin977
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Re: Beta v0.9 Error Report Thread
scene 0792 - No matter how prettily you say it, it won't make touching me OK! (I assume it is meant to be) -> it won't make up for touching me OK!
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
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Moratorius
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Re: Beta v0.9 Error Report Thread
Scene #111:
"Arawn... the beloved child of chaos! Denizen of the great darness that gave birth to the light! The lord of the long awaited end!"
"Arawn... the beloved child of chaos! Denizen of the great darness that gave birth to the light! The lord of the long-awaited end!" (Missing hyphen)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #112:
"He's far more of an idiot even than you."
"He's far more of an idiot than even you." (Reversed order of words)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #113:
"Silence, you have nothing to do with it so shut up!"
"Silence, you have nothing to do with it, so shut up!" (Adding the comma may be an improvement if the clauses are separate... probably unneeded, but I'll leave this here since I already typed it.)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #351:
"But, now... now, I want to take a leave of absense."
"But, now... now, I want to take a leave of absence." (Misspelling)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #360:
"We're already halted."
"We've already halted." (Both versions work, but I think "we've" would work better as a reply...)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
"We are the Holy Empire's 6th Victorius Corps, 3rd Frontier Defense Battalion, 7th Squadron."
I'm assuming "Victorius" is a name, so this sentence is correct; however, if "Victorious" was intended, there's a misspelling.
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved (It's a name)
Scene #393:
"Then, you're the greedy master of troupe a of gladiators?"
"Then, you're the greedy master of a troupe of gladiators?" (Reversed order of words)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
"Octavia... If you were born in a house of imperial knights you should understand."
"Octavia... If you were born in a house of imperial knights then you should understand." (Missing some sort of conjunction... a comma would work too, I suppose)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #2410:
Making a wet sound, Limwris lightly bit at me with her lips.
Is "at" intended?
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #2501:
It seems I got hurt hunting with everyone earlier.
It seems I got hurt while/whilst hunting with everyone earlier. (Missing word)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #2602:
I don't know when she got back, but Ermin was staring intently at us right near by.
I don't know when she got back, but Ermin was staring intently at us right nearby. (nearby is a whole word)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #2707:
I ended up having to buy a dress, and returned to my room.
The name box shows Epona as the one thinking, but it should show Arawn.
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #2804:
"I see. That's great. I'm reassured that I've got a miner elf handling my weapons."
"I see. That's great. I'm reassured that I've got a Miner Elf handling my weapons." (Capitalization)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #3302:
"Seriously?! In that case, your brother passed out drunk so just ditch him.
"Seriously?! In that case, your brother passed out drunk, so just ditch him". (Adding the comma may be an improvement if the clauses are separate... probably unneeded, but I'll leave this here since I already typed it.)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #3501:
"Don't lose heart. Rest easy. I'll eat it for you. Even if I don't look it, I'm a devoted woman!"
"Don't lose heart. Rest easy. I'll eat it for you. Even if I don't look like it, I'm a devoted woman!" (Missing word)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
General:
Should I be seeing double ellipsis everywhere? It seems excessive... but perhaps everyone just takes long pauses while speaking, heh.
EDIT by Cheese: That's how it is in the original. The JRPGS are in love with ellipses.
Oh, and a completely unrelated suggestion: A central listing of previously reported errors would be nice. For example, after something is fixed, just copy it into the first post so people don't have to read each page to ensure they aren't reporting something that has already been fixed.
"Arawn... the beloved child of chaos! Denizen of the great darness that gave birth to the light! The lord of the long awaited end!"
"Arawn... the beloved child of chaos! Denizen of the great darness that gave birth to the light! The lord of the long-awaited end!" (Missing hyphen)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #112:
"He's far more of an idiot even than you."
"He's far more of an idiot than even you." (Reversed order of words)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #113:
"Silence, you have nothing to do with it so shut up!"
"Silence, you have nothing to do with it, so shut up!" (Adding the comma may be an improvement if the clauses are separate... probably unneeded, but I'll leave this here since I already typed it.)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #351:
"But, now... now, I want to take a leave of absense."
"But, now... now, I want to take a leave of absence." (Misspelling)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #360:
"We're already halted."
"We've already halted." (Both versions work, but I think "we've" would work better as a reply...)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
"We are the Holy Empire's 6th Victorius Corps, 3rd Frontier Defense Battalion, 7th Squadron."
I'm assuming "Victorius" is a name, so this sentence is correct; however, if "Victorious" was intended, there's a misspelling.
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved (It's a name)
Scene #393:
"Then, you're the greedy master of troupe a of gladiators?"
"Then, you're the greedy master of a troupe of gladiators?" (Reversed order of words)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
"Octavia... If you were born in a house of imperial knights you should understand."
"Octavia... If you were born in a house of imperial knights then you should understand." (Missing some sort of conjunction... a comma would work too, I suppose)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #2410:
Making a wet sound, Limwris lightly bit at me with her lips.
Is "at" intended?
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #2501:
It seems I got hurt hunting with everyone earlier.
It seems I got hurt while/whilst hunting with everyone earlier. (Missing word)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #2602:
I don't know when she got back, but Ermin was staring intently at us right near by.
I don't know when she got back, but Ermin was staring intently at us right nearby. (nearby is a whole word)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #2707:
I ended up having to buy a dress, and returned to my room.
The name box shows Epona as the one thinking, but it should show Arawn.
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #2804:
"I see. That's great. I'm reassured that I've got a miner elf handling my weapons."
"I see. That's great. I'm reassured that I've got a Miner Elf handling my weapons." (Capitalization)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #3302:
"Seriously?! In that case, your brother passed out drunk so just ditch him.
"Seriously?! In that case, your brother passed out drunk, so just ditch him". (Adding the comma may be an improvement if the clauses are separate... probably unneeded, but I'll leave this here since I already typed it.)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
Scene #3501:
"Don't lose heart. Rest easy. I'll eat it for you. Even if I don't look it, I'm a devoted woman!"
"Don't lose heart. Rest easy. I'll eat it for you. Even if I don't look like it, I'm a devoted woman!" (Missing word)
EDIT by Cheese: Resolved
General:
Should I be seeing double ellipsis everywhere? It seems excessive... but perhaps everyone just takes long pauses while speaking, heh.
EDIT by Cheese: That's how it is in the original. The JRPGS are in love with ellipses.
Oh, and a completely unrelated suggestion: A central listing of previously reported errors would be nice. For example, after something is fixed, just copy it into the first post so people don't have to read each page to ensure they aren't reporting something that has already been fixed.
Last edited by Moratorius on Thu Dec 18, 2008 2:25 am, edited 2 times in total.
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shinjin977
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Re: Beta v0.9 Error Report Thread
scene 0980 - Cay we fight shoulder to shoulder once again? -> Can we ..
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED
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DeamonCross
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Re: Beta v0.9 Error Report Thread
If Demon King is capitalized here shouldn't it always be capitalized, at least when referring to Arawn, as it seems to be a title.
EDIT by Phlebas - Yes, it's always capitalized afaik.
In scene #0110, Drwc says:
Arawn.....
The name of the demon king who will reign over the destruction of this collapsing world....
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED
Other than this scene, every time I have seen the words Demon King, they have been capitalized.
Re: Beta v0.9 Error Report Thread
on the world map the description of Gorsedd Arawm in the help message says
"Gorsedd Arawn" Ruins called Arawn's throne. Monument of a great war victory in the past.
it should be
Monument of a great war won in the past.
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED
and in the description of gael village, gael itself is spelled as gale
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED
"Gorsedd Arawn" Ruins called Arawn's throne. Monument of a great war victory in the past.
it should be
Monument of a great war won in the past.
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED
and in the description of gael village, gael itself is spelled as gale
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED
Re: Beta v0.9 Error Report Thread
In the video that appears twice at Scene #:0110 whe it start in 'long ago' and then appear again in the same scene that shouldn't go with 'Long ago' ?
EDIT:
#0110
'Until i find my sister and hold in her my arms!' 'should go hold her in my arms'
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED (This was already reported)
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and in the next line says 'Mowing down' whas that correct or should go 'Moving down?'
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED (Mowing is correct)
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#0110
Arawn
'Could it be!' that could go with 'Could it be? or Could it be!?'
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED
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in the save points, when you highlight Troops its says Characters' and should go Character's
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED (Characters' is correct)
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And thats for today, i'll go to sleep since is pretty late >_>
EDIT:
#0110
'Until i find my sister and hold in her my arms!' 'should go hold her in my arms'
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED (This was already reported)
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and in the next line says 'Mowing down' whas that correct or should go 'Moving down?'
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED (Mowing is correct)
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#0110
Arawn
'Could it be!' that could go with 'Could it be? or Could it be!?'
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED
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in the save points, when you highlight Troops its says Characters' and should go Character's
EDIT by Cheese: RESOLVED (Characters' is correct)
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And thats for today, i'll go to sleep since is pretty late >_>
Last edited by gatonegro on Thu Dec 18, 2008 4:25 am, edited 1 time in total.
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shinjin977
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Re: Beta v0.9 Error Report Thread
I just finished the game. As of .91 patch, there are no more technical issue with the game that i can find. A very solid job guys, thank you for your hard work. I will now proceed to replaying the game to double check anything I and other testers may have miss.