Beta v0.9 Error Report Thread

[Tatsu]

#0112
Drwc:
"Arghhhh" to "Arghhhh!"
Punctuation.
EDIT by Phlebas: FIXED
Pirates.

#03302
Arawn:
"Haha, what a stupid brother. 'The crab shell is thorny, so your brother will peel it off for you! It would be a disaster if my precious sister got hurt, so don't even touch it!' Or somesuch?"

"... Or some such?"
EDIT by Phlebas - Working as intended
#27061
Epona:
"Huhuhu, they say that moeny govens even the afairs of hell."
Spell check, "even the affairs of hell."
EDIT by Phlebas: FIXED

[tib_sun1]

first time in the secret shop is untranslated for me and I also get the text to too long error

edit: every time I go into the secret shop has untranslated text

EDIT by Cheese: FIXED

[SolidSnake916]

Scene #: 0130_Btl
Every enemy has no name, except one which is Undead Soldier.

Shouldn't the other undead be named Undead?

EDIT by Cheese: FIXED

[SolidSnake916]

Scene#: 0140
Arthur: "......That was praise, wasn't it?" -----> "......That was a praise, wasn't it?" ----->
EDIT by Phlebas: working as intended

[DeamonCross]

Scene #0110:

Drwc says:

Hahaha.....
This age of iron....

Shouldn't it be Age of Iron. In the voiceover just after the first save Age of Gold and Age of Bronze were capitalized, so one would think Age of Iron would follow suit.
EDIT by Phlebas: probably a good point, I'll search all the scripts for mention of the ages and uppercase.

In the same scene, Drwc says:

Just like the collapse of the glorious age of gold long ago, this is inevitable.

but it should be

Just like the collapse of the glorious Age of Gold long ago, this is inevitable.

on a side note, in the same scene, Drwc says:

From gold to silver, from copper to iron.... the world is collapsing.

Seeing how he is talking about the Ages, rather then the colors or elements, shouldn't they be capitalized? In the voiceover after the save in scene #0110 it says Age of Bronze not Age of Copper. so shouldn't Drwc have said:
From Gold to Silver, from Bronze to Iron.... the world is collapsing.
Edit by Phlebas - yep noted

I realize the Japanese voice for Drwc may have said Copper rather then Bronze, but for consistency's sake it should all match up one way or another.

in Scene #0110, Drwc says:

Awaken, Demon King Arawn!

If Demon King is capitalized here shouldn't it always be capitalized, at least when referring to Arawn, as it seems to be a title.
EDIT by Phlebas - Yes, it's always capitalized afaik.

In scene #0110, Drwc says:

How about it? How is it to be a sacrificial goat?

Wouldn't lamb work better than goat? This might just be a personal preference to me but I thought I should mention it.
Edit by Phlebas - goats were probably more familiar sacrificial animals in those times.

In scene #0110, Ogam says:

After that, succession dispute split up the kingdom.
Shouldn't it be:

After that, succession disputes split up the kingdom.
EDIT by Phlebas: Frankly it could be either way, leaving as is
In Scene #0113, Arthur says:

Wah....where did I go wrong in raising you.

Shouldn't it be:

Wah....where did I go wrong in raising you?
EDIT by Phlebas - seems rhetorical (supported by Jap script), leaving as is

[unya]

Scene #200:
"Yes, it's without a doubt Drwc-sama's"
There's a missing period at the end of the sentence.
EDIT by Phlebas: FIXED

Scene #210:
"Festina Lente.
"Make haste slowly".......?"
It should use ' ' instead of " " in that case for the 'make haste slowly'.
EDIT by Phlebas: FIXED

"........ T, thats."
There's a missing appostrophe.
EDIT by Phlebas: FIXED, keep up the good work

Scene #300:
"It's about the 'Elven Race'" should be "It's about the 'Elven Race'." (missing period)
EDIT by Phlebas: FIXED
"Now, now Ermin
If you don't [...]"
Missing period after 'Ermin'.
EDIT by Phlebas: FIXED

Not scene related:
The info of the castle part in the outside part state the Gael tribe as Gale tribe.

EDIT by Cheese: FIXED

[kactaplb]

Suggestion

Is it possible to insert some sort of legend, or implement the mouse over "help dialog box" for the different elements? In the beginning I had trouble figuring out which element corresponded to which symbol. Especially in the harder modes, knowing the elements without having to think about it is crucial. I think I remember having this problem when playing before.

Edit by Phlebas - not sure if that's possible, but in the meantime check the FAQ on this form. TBH they aren't all that important.

[Tezukuri]

Scene #: 0310

"He's believes it's revenge for his father." to "He believes it's revenge for his father."
EDIT by Phlebas - FIXED

Also when mentioning the word "elf" E is not capitalized, I thought it should be since it's the name of the race.
EDIT by Phlebas - working as intended, elf doesn't need to be capitalized any more than "human" (fixed specific names of the races tho, see below).
back to playing~

[Phlebas]

#400
Gale Stew -> Gael Stew (while I'm at it, fixing all instances of "Gael Stew" into uppercase so don't need to report those). FIXED

Uppercased House Elf/Elves, Seal Elf/Elves, Miner Elf/Elves, Mountain Elf/Elves, Shoemaker Elf/Elves throughout the script, if you spot any other forms please report. FIXED

[kactaplb]

2601

1.I was stretching my hands high in the hair, when I noticed soap bubbles floating in front of me. I casually reached out to them, but…… they were farther away that I thought.----> I was stretching my hands high in the air, when I noticed soap bubbles floating in front of me. I casually reached out to them, but…… they were farther away than I thought.
EDIT by Phlebas - cheers, fixed
2505

1. Inside, your know what the answer is, right?"----> Inside, you know what the answer is, right?"
EDIT by Phlebas - fixed
6051
wording maybe?
1. "On my signal, charge through! Kick around the enemies and keep going until we get to the top of the wall!"
EDIT by Phlebas - resolved