Version 1.04 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

[TenguSan]

This error compilation with the skill descriptions used to have a lot more in it (more then 15, even after skipping improper comma usage). From what I understand, the skill descriptions are set images which would have to be edited. With that in mind, i shaved it down to missing and repetitive words, and poorly written sentences. The errors are still relatively minor, but i believe them to be worth fixing.



'Slash' should be "Slashes" (Paragraph 2)

The word 'and' is used twice, consecutively (Paragraph 3)



It burns enemies to (a) crisp... (Paragraph 3)

(minor i know, but it still fits into my criteria)



Infuses the sword with a portion of the power of the ruler of Barga Loa... (too much 'of', poor sentence structure)

(Say that out loud without laughing. XD. I actually hope it isn't fixed, it makes me laugh when i see it)



Paragraph 1 needs to be rewritten, as it is poorly structured. At the very least, "for cutting the enemy" should be removed.



The power of as single strike is low... ('as' should be 'this' or the sentence should be rephrased)



Notes: i know most aren't anything MAJOR, but i just felt they needed to be corrected.. or at least pointed out

more to come?

[Xenoe]

And Oath is supposed to be rank four or so I think, its still rank 5 on the screen.

[Mane]

Right after (or during) mission briefing for Chapter 3 mission 16.

I have seen her use magic to amplify her voice like a megaphone when supervising construction, but I never though she could do this much...

"Thought" is misspelled here.

[Mane]

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Ah......"

Quotation marks are missing at the beginning. Not sure if that is intended or not...

[Mane]

It's not use. She doesn't understand in the slightest.

Pretty sure this is supposed to be "It's no use. [...]"

[Mane]

And Oath is supposed to be rank four or so I think, its still rank 5 on the screen.

Yeah, Shun's description says Oath has the same rank as Desire (4th rank), but the "Sword" sections still says 5th rank...

[Xien]

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"Thought"




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Should be "Yuuto-san" for consistency purposes.

[TenguSan]

When i was on Esperia's route, and right when i got into the very last stage, Esperia talks to Yuuto about the upcoming battle. I think this is literally the very first bit of dialog on the map screen. Even though the text said 'Yuuto-sama' it sounded like she called him "Yuuto the Sage" in voice. I don't speak japanese, so i needed to look at the dialog again and hear her speak to make sure.... but stupid me forgot about it and saved over the game saves. I don't know if this is specific for Esperia's route, or it is a general dialog. Can someone confirm or deny this please? thanks.

[TenguSan]

Orpha's route during Mission 12, If you picked "Sure, I'll come" after Mission 11

Takamine Yuuto
"Yeah... I don't really know if it's okay to bring it home, but... if you'll take proper care of it, then I dont see a problem."

Should be don't

[AQZT]

In the final battle, when you put Kyouko in the squad fighting Shun, she some times says a line before the actual fight starts. She says:
"The one who really like Kaori-chan wasn't you"
Should be "liked", or "loved"