Version 1.04 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

[Phlebas]

Temuorin, the Eternal knows as The Matriarch, sits on a raised platform and looks at me.

You should update to latest patch.

[Orange]

I am using 1.04... Or, at least I think I am...

Also,

I accept the cup, and pretend do be as energetic as possible.

[Xien]

Orange, you should see what errors were posted before posting so as to avoid doubles.
/me deletes some mistakes that were already pointed out :/

[Mane]

She laughs happily and hugs her tray. She's really delighted to recieve this score.

Receive is misspelled.

[Procyon]

Right after the Esperia bonus mission where they eat dinner together and Aselia switches place with Esperia is this:

After all that she's been though, she definitely deserves to think of herself a little more.

Shouldn't it be: she's been through?

[Mane]

Chapter II, Ispelia

Esperia calls to me in a small voice, bringing me back to my senses.

The line before is

......Yutto.

Shouldn't it be Aselia instead of Esperia? The voice is clearly Aselia's VA.

[TenguSan]

Shouldn't it be "no injuries' not "no injury"?



Should be "Esperia has obtained the Rank III Eternity Sword 'Gaea', which grants her the power to control nature.

(second sentence was an incomplete sentence)

Edit: The "slashing through enemies" part should probably either be rephrased or removed.

[Volandum]

Shouldn't it be "no injuries' not "no injury"?

Not really, I think.

[TenguSan]

Shouldn't it be "no injuries' not "no injury"?

Not really, I think.

I say that because it is talking about the squad as a whole, not just one person. It is not really correct to refer it as singular, since it is not possible for a squad of 3 to receive a collective single injury.

Or i may just be over-thinking things >.>

Either way, it really is not THAT important. I am just listing what I believe to be errors.. Minor or otherwise.

[Mane]

It refers to prayers (plural), and the skill's name is Angel's Prayer (singular). It seems to imply multiple healing...therefore needing plural on injury (i.e. injuries). Not that big of a problem, except I'm writing my term paper and I'm getting grammar paranoia (if that even exists)...