Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

[Volandum]

When one space away from Sargios, conversation with Selia.

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"I guess it puts you on the spot of I ask so suddenly......"

[Volandum]

Should "Uruka drags" be "Orpha drags"?

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Start of Chapter 5 Uruka after returning to Phantasmagoria, there's the line a couple of pages after the previous one.

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Uruka looks like she petting a big dog.

Looks like it's missing an "is".

[galvenize]

Minor spelling error:

during the ending credits

Scenario was spelled screnario.

[Volandum]

"Nelie washing the fallen towel" should be Shiah, not Nelie.

[Mane]

I think Himika's Fire Cloak IV is mistakenly labeled as Fire Cloak VI.

[AQZT]

In the epilogue of the normal routes, when Yuuto is talking to Kaori on the road to school after she's forgotten him:
Yuuto: "Er......No, you're probably thinking of something else."
Should be someone, not something (He's responding to her question when she asks whether she's met him before).

[Tinbad]

Act 3 when leaving with Esperia. is this supposed to be some misused pun, or is support misspelled?

[Volandum]

The last mission of Tokimi's route uses a different script from the others, so this problem (which I am aware has been reported for the other routes) crops up again:

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Temuorin, the Eternal knows as the Matriarch, sits on a raised platform and looks at me.

Also there, after defeating Temuorin.

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"I see. She's a persistant one. ...

[Phlebas]

Act 3 when leaving with Esperia. is this supposed to be some misused pun, or is support misspelled?

It's on purpose, Orpha rarely gets those idioms right.

Fixed all reports thus far, keep them coming if you will .

[Orange]

I thought I'd reported this already, but couldn't find it with ctrl+f, so maybe not.

Making a face like she's going to try, she hugs something to her chest.

Also, a couple of lines later:

As long a you understand. Anyway, what's that thing squirming there?

Have you awaken......?

Hmmmmm. Over there, where the flowering are blooming!

Orpha peeks out from the kitchen and smiles as she makes this announcement. Esperia look worriedly at me from behind her.