Beta v0.9 Error Report Thread

[gatonegro]

i finished the game yesterday and was great, the translation was really good too!, but something that i would love more is when riannon call's Arthur brother in the game the voices are nii-sama and in the translation is brother, nii-sama would go more cute, and when i finished the game and you fight the last boss in the Garden, there's a question that if you want to see again the ending but the choices are in japaneses!

[Licky]

scene 1102
When Arthur says
How about you, Octavia?
his name box doesn't appear

when Rathy says
The mountain elves' kingdom is a good place too, Arawn.
should be Arawn-sama by listening to Rathy's voice
EDIT by Phlebas - resolved
Ok, finished the game, the last part I need to play is the hidden dungeon, will edit when I'll play it. Great job woth the translation!

[kactaplb]

I have finished the game once through. The quality of translation was quite high. I will try and play the game again.

[DeamonCross]

In scene #1030, Pwyll says:

I'm not the only who is sad......but I went wild in grief.

It should be:

I'm not the only one who is sad......but I went wild with grief.
EDIT by Phlebas - resolved

I finished the game and tried the bonus tower. I got my butt handed to me. I will have to level up a bit and try it again later. The main game was a lot of fun.

During battle, under Taliesin's magic menu, there is a spell called Spring's Sonata. Under the spell description it says:

A sonata. Gratually restores HP

This should be:

A sonata. Gradually restores HP
EDIT by Phlebas - already reported and fixed

[molitar]

Scene # 0100
It told me that the fated time had arrived.
It told me that the fated time has arrived.

The memories floated up one by one......and my chest tightened up.
The memories floated up one by one......and my chest tightens up.

That those jewel-like times would soon enough be over.
That these jewel-like times would soon enough be over.

I want it come to an end with just me alone.
I want it to come to an end with just me alone.

Please, don't touch these kids......
Please, don't touch those kids......

I screamed out while crying. (this introduction does not sound like it's suppose to be past tense but current)
I scream out while crying.
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all I found for the beginning.

EDIT by Phlebas - resolved

[eezergoode]

Okay, not a beta tester, since i got here after signups were closed, but I was reading the fixed items thread, and noticed something....

red-maned?
1. "As soon as my brother left me in charge, many red-maned soldiers came……"
Edit by Phlebas: Refers to their helmets, don't really see a problem with it
#230

That part of the helmet is usually referred to as the plume, not the mane, so wouldn't red-plumed be a better description?
EDIT by Phlebas - changed for clarity (that came across to me as an defamiliarized description (Riannon probably wouldn't know the proper term for the soldiers' attire, so she's describing them visually) but seems it's causing confusion so changing.).
Okay, I'll go away now....