Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

[Volandum]

End of Chapter II, after one battle after choosing to go to the throne room.

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The moment we finish clearing out the enemies, Esperia flies into the room.

Shouldn't Esperia be Aselia?

[Mane]

Chapter 3

I know that I probably have no choice but to as he wants, but I think about ways to resist him.

Should be "...but to do as..." Is it just me or is anyone else bothered by the fact that there are two "but"s in the same sentence?

[Volandum]

I don't think I'm really bothered; it reads better than most alternative wordings. I mean, you'd think nothing of saying "Nothing but Reaper Tripods with their EMP can efficiently stop a ZOCOM Marv, but they do it brilliantly."

[Volandum]

For the event in the prologue I chose Wait for you/Persuade to confess/My child and got +5 mind instead of +4.

[AQZT]

"Kaori must not realize it"
Should be Kotori. Prologue, right after the "Personality Test".

[AQZT]

'Desire': "Contrator......There is a strange presence a fair distance away"
Should be Contractor. Right before the battle where Uruka's Eternity Sword awakens

[AQZT]

Oh, and in Shun's Etranger Form's unit description, it says that 'Oath' and 'Desire' are the same rank, but 'Oath' is listed as fifth rank on the same page.

[AQZT]

Yuuto: "My family was always met with misfortunate......I'm sure that Kaori felt emotional distress because of me too"
Should be misfortune, not misfortunate.

[myrtas]

Whew!

I just finally completed the game on my first paythrough, and let me say it was one fun ride. I can clearly see the effort that you guys from Dakkodango put into it!! So, let me start by thanking you



"Thank You!" Dakkodango Translations



and say that was one very good translation, i really felt immersed into the stoyrline and some moments made me laugh really hard like this one

Reaaalllyy cracked me up

Lol "genius" stuff translator!!

And there were those other dramatic/sweet/heartbreaking/heart-melting/irritating/annoying/confusing moments disperesed thoroughout the game
(you know what i am talking about )


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Errors Report

Anyway, i guess i just wanted to start with that and show my appreciation. During my playtime, i captured most misspellings or grammar mistakes i spotted and i am here to report them. Please keep in mind that i did this with V.1.01 and without looking at what others have already reported in order to avoid spoilers.

Considering the size and nature of your work, i must say that i am quite impressed by what you have done! I have literally read published fantasy books with more errors than yours

You can grab the captures from these links, which is better since most captures are named after the possible correction

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http://hotfile.com/dl/36156425/06e7f4d/Errors.zip.html
http://rapidshare.com/files/371717406/Errors.zip.html
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=954K5P8N

Or

You can just view them below


http://www.imagebam.com/gallery/21ed8a7 ... 94945c89d/

Finally, one more thing!
Since you guys might patch the game in order the update the changes, is it possible to Add a shortcut for the Trainer menu ? Like you press " T " and it opens the menu that allows you to train your characters. I think it will be very usefull, especially at end game. I shudder to think playing the game without "S","L","E" or "Ctrl" ...

Thanks guys again and hope this was usefull!

Edit: removed direct images to avoid spoilers - Phlebas

[Phlebas]

Eheh thanks, good work.