Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Discuss the translation of Eien no Aselia - Kono Daichi no Hate de.
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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Orange » Mon Mar 29, 2010 1:48 pm

From the description for Takios's skill "Space Severance":
It can cut even through a similarly leveled defender in a single strike, making it a difficult skill to defend again.
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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Meowminator » Mon Mar 29, 2010 2:19 pm

"So the mana we convert to ether is also thesama ,mana as that?"
Should be "Same"

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Orange » Mon Mar 29, 2010 2:28 pm

But, it can't be called the right thing to do. I won't let the things I have one by one drip through my fingers.
Just seems a little weird. Would look better as "I won't let the things I have drip through my fingers one by one." I think.
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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Volandum » Tue Mar 30, 2010 1:29 am

At the start of mission 21 with Kouin/Kyouko in the party Shun uses "Aura Photo Ray" - the voiced word sounds like "photon", should it be "photon"?

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by shiirn » Tue Mar 30, 2010 1:32 am

Volandum wrote:At the start of mission 21 with Kouin/Kyouko in the party Shun uses "Aura Photo Ray" - the voiced word sounds like "photon", should it be "photon"?
Correct. "Photon" seems to be what they always use.
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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Phlebas » Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:38 am

Volandum wrote:At the start of mission 21 with Kouin/Kyouko in the party Shun uses "Aura Photo Ray" - the voiced word sounds like "photon", should it be "photon"?
Can you screenshot that? I don't see anything wrong in the text.
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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by teiglin » Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:44 am

'Oath' strikes down on 'Desire'. And...... before my eyes, desire breaks.
It should be 'Desire' since that's how the sword is always written.

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Volandum » Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:47 pm

Phlebas wrote:
Volandum wrote:At the start of mission 21 with Kouin/Kyouko in the party Shun uses "Aura Photo Ray" - the voiced word sounds like "photon", should it be "photon"?
Can you screenshot that? I don't see anything wrong in the text.
Sure. Attached.
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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Phlebas » Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:19 pm

Ahh cheers, thought it was in actual battle :D.
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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Volandum » Wed Mar 31, 2010 3:22 am

Esperia's Epilogue -

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"In the first place, both of your are......"

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