Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

[Phlebas]

Nope, riquem is a local food, you'll learn to know them well.

[Orange]

Okay, got it.



It seems to pass more quickly than it should, and this shows up right afterwards



So maybe it's more along the lines of a bug causing that screen to appear when it shouldn't rather than the image itself being wrong.

Also

By saying that you desire a future where you can go on a date with me that much, are making a roundabout confession?

Would probably be a little better as "aren't you making a roundabout confession?" or something like that.

[Phlebas]

Yeah interesting bug, haven't seen that happen. Don't think there's anything to do about it, and doesn't really matter much either.

[moyulin1231]

On the second meeting with Lemuria, when she hands Yuuto a yofwal

"Here, a yofawl. [musical note] It's fresh baked. [musical note]"

Should be yofwal from all the other spellings i've seen of it, and should be "It's freshly baked".

[moyulin1231]

Chapter 3
When Uruka meets with the soldiers after capturing Kaori
"Hmph...... I guess we can count on your for things like kidnapping."

[AQZT]

..... was it this way? all the paths look familiar, so I don't know.....
Should be "unfamiliar"
Not sure if you already corrected it though, because I'm still using the original patch, so if you have, I apologize in advance.

[Orange]

If I become unless, my subordinates will......

Probably should say "useless".

Most of the research data should have been blow away, but there may well have been some notes left behind in the Empire.

Should be "blown away"... I think... Though another line from the same character shortly after says the same thing.

I thought it was blow away, but...... this was well made.

So, I guess could be something intentional, I dunno. I'll leave it here just in case.

[AQZT]

Uruka:
You are Kind Yuuto-sama. I now see the reason why the spirits of this country have different expressions from those elsewhere.
From chapter 3. She says it with a "-dono" suffix, but you translated as a "-sama".

[chaosbreak]

Start of Chapter 3, Lesteena's conversation with the Malorigan guy:
The guy:"I'll guarantee the safety of everything within Rakio's national border."

I was thinking that it should be "I'll guarantee your(you and your group's) safety until you reach Rakio."

[Orange]

Start of Chapter 3, Lesteena's conversation with the Malorigan guy:
The guy:"I'll guarantee the safety of everything within Rakio's national border."

I was thinking that it should be "I'll guarantee your(you and your group's) safety until you reach Rakio."

I interpreted that as meaning that he wouldn't attack anything that had belonged to Rakios to begin with. (So, he would only take over the newly acquired territories.)

Lesteena now looks miffed. Her expression keeps changing as the conversation progresses. Conversing with her like this soothes my battle-weary heart.

Was that intentional, or was it supposed to say Lemuria there? Well, all the other lines here say Lemuria, and it's not mentioned again in the scene, so I assumed it was an error.

Uruku usually trains by herself around here, but...... it seems I guessed wrong.

I'll probably be able to calm down naturally like this, especial with Aselia here next to me.

Should be "especially".

The kid bow quickly and disappears. Surprised, I watch him run off.

Be cautious. I was mistaken. They're seem to in fact be quite strong.

Daaaaa! I'm meeting with Yuuto-sempai when Kotori's not here. I'm so excited!

Should be "when Kaori's not here".

I pick up 'Desire', who I had left leaning on the fridge. Kaori gulps when he sees the blade's dimly shining blue light.

Should be Kotori, and she.

Ah! I bought bentous! There are pork cutlets, friend chicken, and a bunch of other fried stuff.

I'm so stressed out that I bet I'll have a hard time sleeping. I probably ought to rest at least little, though.

Probably would be better as "at least a little".

This girls speaks your real feelings. Every word is the truth.

But, even if that's usually the case, there are times when she really ticks me off. She stared learning the flute after I did, but she got better than me!

My strike dissipates Takios's shockwave. With a thundrous roar, the desks in the classroom are blow away.

Blow away again... Also, my firefox spellchecker thingie says it's actually "thunderous", but I didn't notice that myself until it told me, so meh.

Perhaps it was at least good excercise for someone of Takios's level......

Should be "exercise".

I already knew this full well, but he's on a different level from the spirit's I've fought until now.

Should be spirits.