Dakkodango Translations

Report errors here. Full line is enough, no need to describe the context unless you have trouble getting the full sentence. Do mention if the problem is in a briefing, battle dialog, or image, though.

"I ended up sleeping through most of the afternoon. Maybe I'm not so much lazy as just completely exhausted."

Should "afternoon", not be "morning", as he then goes into his plans to sleep more during lunch?

Is she really an angel......? But, are angels foreigners? I won't understand what she's saying.

I think "can't" would make more sense here.

Two soldier pick up Yuuto and carry him away on their shoulders.

Should be "soldiers".

She sticks out her tongue and smiles. I can't help thinking that Esperia's expression at this moment is incredible cute.

Should be "incredibly".

.When Yuuto casts Inspire and actually shouts out the spell's name..it shows "Insprire!"

2."Rakios, Sardbart and Esperia have bound a War Pact, called the dragon soul alliance"

Should be Ispelia.

3.After Esperia first explains the about tactics and building facilities and all:
"She's small, which black ponytails"
Should be "with"

4."To me, we arent a human and spirits, we are comrades"

Should be spirit.

5. "The protagonists are the second prince of a certain country and his heroic comrades"
Should be "protagonist is".

Might be intended, but when Yuuto is trying to tell his name to Esperia (chapter 1), he speaks a little bit of French

"Je ma'ppelle Yuuto"
- should be "Je m'appelle Yuuto"

Right before the line "Kaori has heard from Oruphaliru that Rakios's spirits will be dispatched to defeat the dragon of the Rikdius Mountains." the screen that shows the date and stuff says "Chapter Five"

Chapter 1: "But in the end, the ones who will be fighting are us"
There isn't anything grammatically wrong with this, but it would be a lot more natural if it was written as:
"But in the end, we will be the ones who are fighting"
It sounds really awkward in its current form

Orange wrote:Right before the line "Kaori has heard from Oruphaliru that Rakios's spirits will be dispatched to defeat the dragon of the Rikdius Mountains." the screen that shows the date and stuff says "Chapter Five"

Can you get a screenshot for that? Guess not tho. Didn't spot anything out of the ordinary in the should-be-related images.

"The strain from these continuous battles is putting me at the limit of fatigue. I stick Desire into the ground and use it support my weight"
There should be a "to" after "it".

Oh. Oki. Also, I'll see if I can get that screenshot, one sec