Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Discuss the translation of Eien no Aselia - Kono Daichi no Hate de.
moyulin1231
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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by moyulin1231 » Sat Mar 27, 2010 7:09 am

At the ending credits, Scenario is spelled "Screnario"

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by moyulin1231 » Sat Mar 27, 2010 7:09 am

sry, meant it's misspelled "Screnario"

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Orange » Sat Mar 27, 2010 9:22 am

That wasn't our fault.
Is one of the choices you can pick at one point. I think it is supposed to say "That wasn't your fault."
Not realizing that I'm here, Urpha tilts her head and looks back at Uruka.
Thats odd...... Is Faren's slipping up?
Should be "Is Faren slipping up?" I think.
Lesteen has been thinking intently with her hand on her chin the whole time. She looks at me with resolute eyes.

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Neo-Exile » Sat Mar 27, 2010 1:00 pm

After the first battle, when 'Desire' tells Yuuto to assault orpha
"Contractor... I answered your desire... Thus..."
I think it should be like
Contractor... I had answered your desire... Thus...

And the line after that,
"You must answer answer my 'desire' as well"
Notice that "answer" is mentioned two times.

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by bestiedamo1 » Sat Mar 27, 2010 8:26 pm

hmm seems no one else noticed this yet
before mission 13
it goes "there's are no big complaints from either rakios's main territory or from any of the new ones"
should be there :P

--btw i updated to the new 1.03--

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Nemo » Sat Mar 27, 2010 10:13 pm

I hope it's the good place to post this.
In chapter's V labyrinth, the direction are labelled "forward, left, right, back" ; I've been drawing a map (dungeon and dragon style !), and shouldn't it be "north west east south" ? The directions are clearly given in an absolute fashion, independantly from where Yuuto is facing (as would forward / left etc. suggest). The first time there I was quite confuse because I pictured the place with Yuuto's facing in mind :)

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by bkirch » Sun Mar 28, 2010 9:21 am

At the end of mission 3, Orpha says:
Eh? Orpha will stay will papa too!!
The second "will" should be "with"

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Orange » Sun Mar 28, 2010 10:03 am

'Oath' chose me specifically. He told me to rule over this world with me own power!
She looks up at the sky. A lot has happed to us.

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by teiglin » Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:24 pm

I realize that I've started to smile in delf-derision.
Not entire sure what a delf is, but it sounds cool. If I had one, I sure wouldn't deride it.

Line is from regular dialogue (it's during a battle interlude though).

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Orange » Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:53 pm

Her voice grows more and more hoarse. She decided not to cry, but her tears ducts are betraying her resolve.

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