Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Discuss the translation of Eien no Aselia - Kono Daichi no Hate de.
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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Volandum » Sun Apr 04, 2010 3:16 pm

When one space away from Sargios, conversation with Selia.

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"I guess it puts you on the spot of I ask so suddenly......"

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Volandum » Sun Apr 04, 2010 11:32 pm

Should "Uruka drags" be "Orpha drags"?
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Start of Chapter 5 Uruka after returning to Phantasmagoria, there's the line a couple of pages after the previous one.

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Uruka looks like she petting a big dog.
Looks like it's missing an "is".

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by galvenize » Mon Apr 05, 2010 7:06 am

Minor spelling error:

during the ending credits

Scenario was spelled screnario.

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Volandum » Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:21 pm

"Nelie washing the fallen towel" should be Shiah, not Nelie.
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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Mane » Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:34 am

I think Himika's Fire Cloak IV is mistakenly labeled as Fire Cloak VI.
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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by AQZT » Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:36 am

In the epilogue of the normal routes, when Yuuto is talking to Kaori on the road to school after she's forgotten him:
Yuuto: "Er......No, you're probably thinking of something else."
Should be someone, not something (He's responding to her question when she asks whether she's met him before).

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Tinbad » Tue Apr 06, 2010 5:27 am

Act 3 when leaving with Esperia. is this supposed to be some misused pun, or is support misspelled?
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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Volandum » Tue Apr 06, 2010 10:00 am

The last mission of Tokimi's route uses a different script from the others, so this problem (which I am aware has been reported for the other routes) crops up again:

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Temuorin, the Eternal knows as the Matriarch, sits on a raised platform and looks at me.
Also there, after defeating Temuorin.

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"I see. She's a persistant one. ...

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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Phlebas » Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:07 pm

Tinbad wrote:Act 3 when leaving with Esperia. is this supposed to be some misused pun, or is support misspelled?
It's on purpose, Orpha rarely gets those idioms right.

Fixed all reports thus far, keep them coming if you will :D.
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Re: Version 1.03 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Orange » Wed Apr 07, 2010 4:10 am

I thought I'd reported this already, but couldn't find it with ctrl+f, so maybe not.
Making a face like she's going to try, she hugs something to her chest.
Also, a couple of lines later:
As long a you understand. Anyway, what's that thing squirming there?
Have you awaken......?
Hmmmmm. Over there, where the flowering are blooming!
Orpha peeks out from the kitchen and smiles as she makes this announcement. Esperia look worriedly at me from behind her.

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