Version 1.04 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Discuss the translation of Eien no Aselia - Kono Daichi no Hate de.
TenguSan
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Re: Version 1.04 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by TenguSan » Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:18 am

This error compilation with the skill descriptions used to have a lot more in it (more then 15, even after skipping improper comma usage). From what I understand, the skill descriptions are set images which would have to be edited. With that in mind, i shaved it down to missing and repetitive words, and poorly written sentences. The errors are still relatively minor, but i believe them to be worth fixing.

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'Slash' should be "Slashes" (Paragraph 2)

The word 'and' is used twice, consecutively (Paragraph 3)

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It burns enemies to (a) crisp... (Paragraph 3)

(minor i know, but it still fits into my criteria)

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Infuses the sword with a portion of the power of the ruler of Barga Loa... (too much 'of', poor sentence structure)

(Say that out loud without laughing. XD. I actually hope it isn't fixed, it makes me laugh when i see it)

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Paragraph 1 needs to be rewritten, as it is poorly structured. At the very least, "for cutting the enemy" should be removed.

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The power of as single strike is low... ('as' should be 'this' or the sentence should be rephrased)



Notes: i know most aren't anything MAJOR, but i just felt they needed to be corrected.. or at least pointed out

more to come?
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Xenoe
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Re: Version 1.04 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Xenoe » Thu Apr 29, 2010 4:04 pm

And Oath is supposed to be rank four or so I think, its still rank 5 on the screen.

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Re: Version 1.04 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Mane » Fri Apr 30, 2010 1:38 am

Right after (or during) mission briefing for Chapter 3 mission 16.
I have seen her use magic to amplify her voice like a megaphone when supervising construction, but I never though she could do this much...
"Thought" is misspelled here.
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Re: Version 1.04 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Mane » Fri Apr 30, 2010 8:23 pm

See image.

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Ah......"
Quotation marks are missing at the beginning. Not sure if that is intended or not...
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Re: Version 1.04 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Mane » Sun May 02, 2010 12:19 am

It's not use. She doesn't understand in the slightest.
Pretty sure this is supposed to be "It's no use. [...]"

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Re: Version 1.04 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Mane » Sun May 02, 2010 12:34 am

Xenoe wrote:And Oath is supposed to be rank four or so I think, its still rank 5 on the screen.
Yeah, Shun's description says Oath has the same rank as Desire (4th rank), but the "Sword" sections still says 5th rank...
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Re: Version 1.04 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by Xien » Sun May 02, 2010 11:34 pm

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"Thought"


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Should be "Yuuto-san" for consistency purposes.

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Re: Version 1.04 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by TenguSan » Mon May 03, 2010 12:43 am

When i was on Esperia's route, and right when i got into the very last stage, Esperia talks to Yuuto about the upcoming battle. I think this is literally the very first bit of dialog on the map screen. Even though the text said 'Yuuto-sama' it sounded like she called him "Yuuto the Sage" in voice. I don't speak japanese, so i needed to look at the dialog again and hear her speak to make sure.... but stupid me forgot about it and saved over the game saves. I don't know if this is specific for Esperia's route, or it is a general dialog. Can someone confirm or deny this please? thanks.
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Re: Version 1.04 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by TenguSan » Tue May 04, 2010 11:52 pm

Orpha's route during Mission 12, If you picked "Sure, I'll come" after Mission 11
Takamine Yuuto
"Yeah... I don't really know if it's okay to bring it home, but... if you'll take proper care of it, then I dont see a problem."
Should be don't
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Re: Version 1.04 Misspelling / Grammar Mistake Report Thread

Post by AQZT » Sat May 22, 2010 11:10 pm

In the final battle, when you put Kyouko in the squad fighting Shun, she some times says a line before the actual fight starts. She says:
"The one who really like Kaori-chan wasn't you"
Should be "liked", or "loved"

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